This must be every parent’s nightmare… Well, actually almost every father’s nightmare.
That was my conclusion and I was only 85 words into the 3,465 worded piece. I giggled because I saw my late father written all over Aito’s introduction.
Aito spins a tale of old pride in cultures that are slowing dying. A reality that is seen in communities and countries that used to rely on certain traditions now making compromises and sometimes not for the better.
She was the stubborn fly that was following the corpse right into the grave.
A tale of parents’ expectations met with the very real reality of who they have raised and having to deal with the choices their children make.
As they slowly traverse the list, each member from either side coming to grips with the uncertainty that is about to enter their world.
“Eeeehhhhhhh, what is this? We asked for goats and you people are here with rabbits.” She struck her open mouth with her palm repeatedly, making mocking noises.
Two worlds, each from opposite ends of the spectrum and none of them about to back down.
In my opinion, this was a good read.
I especially like the detail with which Aito explores the thoughts running through Adaeze’s uncle’s head as well as the different emotions that surface through other key characters.
Aito also has the sneaky art of playing with emotions; as just when you are hopeful, he snatches the rug right from under you! Consider this your warning…
I think this story is easy to relate to because most of us know an Adaeze and sympathise with her uncle.
What would you have done, if you were Adaeze?
(Read the story here)
The List by Aito Osemegbe Joseph was announced as having been shortlisted for the Writivism 4th Annual Short Story Prize. It has now been published at Munyori Literary Journal head on over there to read it yourself.